 YEEEHAW A WEDDIN pictures - JENNA BUSH'S WEDDING JENNA BUSH'S 2ND LINK / Your links appear to be down. Here is an alternate News Link for your entry. The composition is very nice. I would play about with the grass, flowers and the dress fabric around the feet of the pig so that the pig appears to be more grounded. This may mean cloning the grass so that it covers more of the pig's feet and/or applying shaddowing to the flowers and dress behind the pig. Watch how you apply your shadows as they should only be visible if they fall against a neighbouring object. The closer the object, the sharper the shadow. If the object casting the shadow is standing free, then any applied shadows may appear as a glowing effect or may damage the overall depth or perspective of your work. The expression on the pig's face is great and fits in nicely with the whimsical theme of your entry. Normally the face of the girl would need to be desaturated to match the existing skin tones of the source but I would leave it as it is since it is the focal point of your work. / Good choice of news story. Excellent critique from c00per.
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