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Ipod boom advert image by johnx1 of the Independents
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19 User comments about photoshop ipod Boom Advert Pics

kanakahaole

Hey. MY iPod did that last week. (Too funny)

PaulHisson

Very cool chop. It's a pity that the text is barely readable though, even in full view (please, use more lines and make it larger). And you should write 'boyfriend' (not 'bf') in an ad.

johnx1

I was going to do it all in txt speak to bring it up to dat. will get it tweaked

johnx1

tweaked it now, have to keep the text slightly out of focus to match old image, much better now though

PaulHisson

It's much better, but some lines of text are too short and others too long. You should place your carriage returns differently (just my humble opinion, of course).

johnx1

I normaly ALWAYS have the text centred for this kind of chop as I like the balance it gives to the eye when reading, Once again though I went for the original text layout to keep the oldy feel. thanks for the advice though, keep it coming I always take note of all and any tips / advice I can use in future chops

PaulHisson

My explanations are probably not clear enough. Have a look at this, and you will see where I think that you should remove or add carriage returns in the text. Just my humble opinion, again. By the way, if your chop were bad, I would never spend much time in commenting on it. It's because it's a good one that I think that you should correct those minor mistakes...

johnx1

I didnt think you were saying they were bad mate. All your advice has been great. keep it up

johnx1

Had a quick tweak of the blurb section

PaulHisson

I think that you will hate me (if it's not the case yet.) but I've just spotted a few typos: 'state of the ark' instead of 'state of the art', there's now an unneeded space before 'excludes Canada" and you wrote some words with the first letter in uppercase where it is not needed either (previous version mostly used lowercase letters and that was better then). But the good news is that the text is now well-placed and margins respected. So, it's almost perfect.

johnx1

no problem mate, " state of the ARK" was deliberate. Im insinuating it is outdated . Thanks again mate

PaulHisson

Ok. About "state of the ark", I didn't get it earlier (English is not my native language, so, I may miss some puns and play on words at times). But... er... there's still an unneeded space before "Excludes Canada..." (just after the left bracket). You wrote "( Excludes Canada & Washington State)" instead of "(Excludes Canada & Washington State)". Oh, and another one at the end of the text: "The I- BOOM" instead of "The I-BOOM". No, please, don't kill me, mate.

johnx1

dont worry, I did take it out then clicked back a step to catch something and missed changing it again .

NewsMaster

Impressive. Great text write-up too I also like what you did with the Apple logo

johnx1

Thanks again everyone, I am over the moon, and I dedicate half this wood to Paul and thank him for all his help. I know more now about text layout etc than I ever did before, having members that know this stuff is awesome. thanks Paul

PaulHisson

Congratulations once again and thank you, John. You're welcome, but I haven't done much here. That's you alone who really deserve the trophies that you got in this contest.

DesignerKratos

again congrats on the woody and nice work too

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