what a nice idea, also well executed. I'm not sure but i think that the monitor's base need a desaturation.
Mmm. If you do that too much, you get her lipstick all over the inside of screen and it's a bummer to clean... What's behind his head. If it's the steam of passion, make it more so. If not, burn it out.
is that his dad breathing down his neck.
Nice idea. This would make a nice illustration for an article about Internet dating.
Interesting. But the foggy bit behind his head is distracting. Also, there should be a bit of shadow from his hande on the edge of the monitor.