hey there buddy. i really like your work here. if i were to give an advise, i would try on getting those light beams and giving a good causian blur on them. this way it wont have too many sharp edges and will look a bit better. i would also lower a bit of the opacitty on the birds...you'll nottice when doing so that they will merge perfectly with the original image color and even texture. other than this good luck to you.
Hidden, your work is awesome. Witty and clever but NOT MEAN. Some amazing work appears on this site but winds up spoiled because of the mean-spirtedness. Your little angels are JUST the right touch. Your little guy rolling his eyes back and seeing the birds flying puts me back to younger days. . You KNOW he's about to barf.
I never saw anyone add the lower part to this composition. This one looks very clever and Hilarious.I'd soften the edges of the rays though, as PSH suggests