I see this and I think of the steam roller scene in 'A Fish Called Wanda'.
Your work could do with a little bit of tweaking, IMO your shadows are too sharp for the overcast day and the lighting on the mobsters body is incorrect and to quote another member it looks a little 'cut n pastey' to me, I think it is the little things your overlooking that prevent you getting the higher votes that you seem capable of.
Edward Hopper's "Nighthawks", 1942. He said he based it on a diner in NYC. In 1942 TV in America was interrupted by the War, except in a few places, NYC being one of them, where WABD continued to broadcast. Original Hopper Member reactions:
Clean work. I though this would place higher. The bartender looking at the TV is a great touch.