The text on the side of the box really distracts from the other work you've done. It needs to be adjusted to meet the same angle as the side of the box, and maybe toned down just a bit so it appears on the box rather than in front of it.
Nice, clever idea. I agree with midian, but also, the word "with" is mispelled.
Did you go to school. If you did you must not have finished. You misspelled one of the easiest words in the English language, "with". You spelled it "whith". Big Oops....