Osama Bin Laden Hide and Seek Champion
Osama Bin Laden Hide and Seek Champion
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      • Funny, but (in my humble opinion) the reddish pink external frame is unnecessary. You should leave more margins especially on the left and right side of the cover itself (purple/indigo main part). Then, make your title a bit smaller (and also some texts). I would not have used this font (you can keep it for your magazine title if you wish, but should change it at least for the texts). Ok, Arial, Arial Narrow, Arial Black or Helvetica (for instance) are not very original, but if you use them with different sizes, height, width (etc.), you can make those fonts less boring and even pleasant to read. Anyway, you should change the alignment of some paragraphs: instead of centered everywhere, they could be - more or less - aligned on the left or on the right depending on their respective placement on the cover. You can also play with the height of some main words too. Maybe should you change the color the light blue text: you could use for instance a color near the reddish pink of the external frame once you've removed it. Those are just a few humble suggestions, of course, but it's better to look at a few covers of real magazines to see how their texts are written (fonts, size) and placed usually.
      • A very good chop despite all the suggestions from Paul.
      • Thanks grumpy.. I am ALMOST used to Paul's scrutiny.
      • Hope you don't mind, Hidden Author. I'm probably more attentive on those details (fonts and text placement) than the majority of members here, but those were purely disinterested suggestions as I haven't submitted anything for this contest.
      • It's cool Paul... I was just picking at ya, I really do appreciate the time and input you put into your evaluation. I just have a little devil in me. P.S. I did change it up a bit
      • Finally. A hilarious... I was feeling weird about it too
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