I love it, but you need to bring the shadows in harmony. See the fuzzy shadow from the elephant versus some strong shadow from the sign versus no shadow from the kids. Experiment what types of shadows will look better there, but make them the same style for all the mentioned objects
Thanks News I'm really horrible when it comes to shadows and such and I keep on trying but my source and depth perceptions seem to be off. ha ha I made the shadows a bit more harder than before so they match more up to what the sign looks like. I just don't know at times how hard of a light to make it and sometimes use the soft lighting and lower the opacity on it but it seems to be almost non existent so thanks for the help and let me know if this might be too harsh of a lighting
There are many good tutorials on shadows - I suggest you google for them. Remember that shadows are your friends and practice makes perfection. In the edited version, the shadows are too strong, I think.